Wednesday, 13 March 2013

Splash

''Splash went the water getting kicked out''.On a gorgeous day we had swim sports. the sun made the water look like crystal floating into the air. There were lots of clapping and cheering I felt very nervous. But I tried my best to win but I could not win. People in the pool looked nervous.The Champian ship were people which were very fast. Mr Young was racing a yr4. I saw Mr yroung tring his best. It was a lovely day.
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4 comments:

  1. Mom and Dad14 March 2013 at 01:37

    well done Geon!
    What a lovely writing it is!
    We would like to have more stroy from you.

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  2. Unknown17 March 2013 at 16:27

    Great recount Geon, well done!

    From Elise

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  3. Unknown18 March 2013 at 17:56

    cool

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  4. Unknown18 March 2013 at 18:43

    Thanks for reading my story Elise.

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