Tuesday, 12 March 2013

Swimming Sports

One hot summery day at swimming sports I jumped into the pool. The pool was extremely cold. I was event 13 and 14. The pool was like a cold spa. I felt tremendous. The lane was stretchy. When I hopped in I was so nervous like a boiled sausage.

By Denzel.
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  1. Unknown13 March 2013 at 16:13

    Awesome Denzel - like a boiled sausage? What great descriptive words you've used!
    Donna Swart (Tom's Mum) :)

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  2. Unknown13 March 2013 at 16:31

    Thank you and can you think of any disckripded words?

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