Wednesday, 13 March 2013

swimming

splish   splash   clap    clap     finally   it s     swimming  sport s  you  have  to  choose  three  or two       things     for     swimming.I  was  waiting  for  hours  and   getting   sweaty  at  the  pool.I  thouwt  it  felt  freezing  cold    but      i   got warm.  It   looked  bright   like  a  diamond   and   when  I  was   waiting  for  my   turn   the     water     went    boom   crash   bang    the   water   went   all   over   me   but      it    was   good   it   got   my    sweat    of    and   I   felt    very       very    tired    after   the   simming   sports.  The   end   by   erin
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 March 2013 at 23:34

    Cool story! We will need to tell Nana in Scotland to check this out. Well done Erin. We are proud of you.

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  2. Unknown17 March 2013 at 23:18

    Wow Erin that was a good story

    By Ashleigh

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