Wednesday, 13 March 2013

the big swim

Yay the bell rang when we got there they welcomed us they called out 1 can you line up!then they called out 2345 and6 it was me! it felt like hours for my turn i felt graceful in the pool i got in yay starfish is here I did it !i felt like a starfish my self my back was so hot! but lucky the hot was going  into my body it was78 and9!i got in it was flutter board then 10 running race it was me again when swimming sports was over it was home time      byzoe     the end

2 comments:

  1. well done zoe you have used some interesting
    words in your story
    FROM TOM

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  2. cool story Zoe I love it
    from Kyla

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