Tuesday, 19 March 2013

YAY TODAY IS SWIMMING SPORTS


When  I hoped into the water it felt like I ice cubes when  I finsh one I was freezing and I  came last in       all  of them bat elist I did it. and I was stel  icing and when I got out I  was worm. when I went home. I  was alittlbit  hagey. sowe I ati same then I went to bed.

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By Broc
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  1. Miss McKinnon20 March 2013 at 23:28

    I like the way you have included a simile in your writing Broc- "it felt like ice cubes." What a great way to add detail in an interesting way.

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