Tuesday, 19 March 2013

YES SWIMMING sports

yes today we are doing swimming sports my numbers are 12 13 14. when we got there mrs Mitchell said if you have 1 on your hand then line up. When it was 12 I hoped in the pool got ready and launched off. I could feel how fast I was going as I sped down the pool. I nearly came last but I was not. THE END BY DANIEL. B

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  1. Mum19 March 2013 at 18:15

    Tino pai Daniel, what a great piece of writing! I liked how you used really interesting words like launch and sped to say how fast you were going.

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    1. Unknown10 April 2013 at 17:17

      thank you for the comment mum love you. what do you think i could do next time?

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  2. Aunty Kim21 March 2013 at 13:48

    Daniel, How cool that your class is writing a blog!! . So lovely to be able to read about all the amazing things you are doing at school. I loved reading your story about swimming sports. Awesome. Sounds like it was so much fun. I wish I could have been there to see you speeding down the pool . Well done.! Go Daniel.! :)

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  3. Unknown22 March 2013 at 19:12

    Hi Daniel,
    This is so cool. It's great to be able to see what you are up to at your school. I know you would have been awesome at swimming sports because I have seen your fantastic swimming in Granna's pool. You are an awesome writer too Daniel. I love the words you chose, it made me want to read more.
    Thanks for sharing with us. We will remember to pop in and look at your Blog again another day. Keep up the great work Daniel.
    Love from Aunty Karen

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