Monday, 15 April 2013

TO PUMPKIN

I am so sorry we had to roll you down the hill I wish you could stay. It was so fun having you. I loved how huge and FAT you were. You were so cute when you were a seed I love you pumpkin 
love from DAN.B
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  1. Unknown15 April 2013 at 15:23

    good job

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  2. Unknown15 April 2013 at 15:48

    Daniel that was a great story I liked when you had the word fat. from Marina

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  3. Lissa Bainbridge-Smith15 April 2013 at 17:41

    Hi Daniel.
    I liked the words you used to describe the pumpkin when it was big.
    I wonder what descriptive words you could use to describe why you thought it was cute when it was a seed?

    Love from mum

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    1. Unknown16 April 2013 at 17:35

      tank you for the comment mum what do you think i can do next time?

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  4. Anonymous6 May 2013 at 00:27

    What a great story from amelia







    What a great story you wrote, from Amelia

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