Monday, 6 May 2013

My trip to christchurch

I went on a plane trip to christchurch i had a friend called Ben. I got on the plane just after my
which was on Tuesday.I heard  a bird hit the plane I was shocked when the bird hit my window.
I said  hello bird he starred at me but I did'nt then I smacked the window suddenly the bird fell off.

By Thomas
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 May 2013 at 14:30

    eww the bird things gross your lucky you went to christ church hope you didn't shake a lot by Kaylin rm 24

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  2. Unknown21 May 2013 at 16:49

    You were pretty lucky to also go on the All Blacks plane, aye Thomas! I was jealous! :)
    I'm not sure if the bird part is true or you were writing creatively!
    I think at the end of the first line you were supposed to add "birthday party".(which was on the Monday, 29th Apr).

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