Monday, 12 August 2013

swim safe

"YES" today it is swim safe today. At water world we get to go in the dive pool with my group. When we got in we doggy paddled to the middle  of the dive pool and back  doing skull we did step in this is when you just walk in and sink. Next we did diving from the side of the pool. Finally we had free time. I liked swim safe i didn't want to go back to school. By Daniel
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  1. Unknown12 August 2013 at 16:11

    Excellent recount Daniel, I like how I can see speechmarks in your story. Was that you speaking? I wasnt sure.

    Mr Young

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  2. Unknown13 August 2013 at 00:27

    That's a great story Daniel! I was exactly the same when I was a kid - in fact, I still love swimming! Glad you had a great time.
    Donna Swart (Tom's Mum)

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  3. Lissa Bainbridge-Smith14 August 2013 at 15:32

    Great story Daniel, I liked the detail you put in your story. I wonder how you were feeling when you stepped into the deep dive pool? Were you nervous or excited? Mum

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