Wednesday, 13 March 2013

Swiming Sports

In  the  pool , the  water  goes  swish  swosh  like  a  washing  Machine  when. When. All. The.  Kids.  Hop. Out. All  the. Water. Goes.  Everywhere. It. Goes. On. The concrete. And. On. The
Chickens. Dirt. Bath. When. You. Jump. In. The. Pool. It. Is. Frezing. Cold. Water. Went
on. Me. As. They. Raced. And. kicked.  and. Paddled. As. Fast. As.they. Could. When. I
Hopped. In. It. felt.  like. The. water. Was. Sporkling. like. A diamond. fluttering
down. from the. Sky down. Into. The. pool. When  I  hopped. In. They. Clapped
The. blocks. I was. Swimming. So. Fast. Like. A. sharle. The. end.
By. Hayley

3 comments:

  1. nice describing words Hayley, I wish I could have been their to watch you.

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  2. cool as story Hayley
    from Kyla.

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  3. hayley too much full stops . by caleb

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