In the pool , the water goes swish swosh like a washing Machine when. When. All. The. Kids. Hop. Out. All the. Water. Goes. Everywhere. It. Goes. On. The concrete. And. On. The
Chickens. Dirt. Bath. When. You. Jump. In. The. Pool. It. Is. Frezing. Cold. Water. Went
on. Me. As. They. Raced. And. kicked. and. Paddled. As. Fast. As.they. Could. When. I
Hopped. In. It. felt. like. The. water. Was. Sporkling. like. A diamond. fluttering
down. from the. Sky down. Into. The. pool. When I hopped. In. They. Clapped
The. blocks. I was. Swimming. So. Fast. Like. A. sharle. The. end.
By. Hayley
nice describing words Hayley, I wish I could have been their to watch you.
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hayley too much full stops . by caleb
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